Whats she's doing...

Whats she's doing...

A Poem by Tai Chi Italy
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An expressive poem, hot off his pressed thumb! x

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She’s looking down the barrel
of the most beautiful future.
She’s twinkling in his minds thigh.

 

 


*Thanks to red hot chillies

 

© 2010 Tai Chi Italy


Author's Note

Tai Chi Italy
erm! entering a new phase...all observations welcome.

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Made me chuckle I guess his brains are in his pants. Her's where it should be. Good write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tai Chi Italy

7 Years Ago

lol Thanks Mark! it's an oldie but goodie! lol Wish I could find the sob to give the inspiration aga.. read more
Strange twist, I'm digging it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ooooh! yeah! this piece is hot and all i could say right now is "the new phase?"...please bring it on.

this time am the one that/s smiling at you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love that last line. It's a delightful little play on words.
Can't wait to see more of this 'new phase'.

Stealing your fresh vegetables, Edgey

Posted 11 Years Ago


Hi Tai, yep, love it. That last line, last word actually, totally unexpected. Seems to me you had fun writing this and yeah, love the RCP. Regards Lb

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

new phase, eh? i am intrigued for more.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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