A Poem by Tai-San


They say I am pretty,
They think I am stupid.
They think I do not see their game,
Although I do.
They all ask me out,
Though I have not yet said yes.
I hate them,
Yet I love them all.
I’m just gonna wait until I find the right one.

© 2009 Tai-San

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I've felt this way many times toward guys. It's a sort of a "can't live with 'em, can't live without 'em" sort of thing.
Very nice, very nice. :)
Keep up the good work,

Posted 11 Years Ago

Isn`t that something ?
Everyone has given you the best advice.
"I'm just gonna wait until I find the right one."
You have already decided on the best advice.
Just wait---When you least expect it, your hero
will appear.
Nice poem, very well done.
Rated-----100 %
------ Eagle Cruagh

Posted 11 Years Ago

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You are right
Do not fall for appearances or sweet words of guys
Especially teenage boys .. their only interest is to know how many girls they can get .. not all guys though
And it's not harsh to find the right one ... you will find him, at the right moment
So do not engage yourself in a relationship which you know will have the hurtful 'The End'
Well penned!

Posted 11 Years Ago

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good one :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

It is best to wait for the right one.
Great Job

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on May 21, 2009



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