Twinss (The Book That Never Ends)

There's 5 other versions which my friends and I'll edit so it fits . So tell me what you think: if you liked it, if you think it's good, and/or what I could do better. I jacked some of this review from my friend jen (sorry jen) but I'm not that creative at writing only in drawing which you can see some in my pics :)
(that explains the 70 in literacy -_-) I'm going to post the rest of this chapter later (when i decide to stop goofing off and post it)
I'm going to try to name all the characters we have in this book:
Miku, Talia, Jaden, James, Hender, Hayden, Kylie, Dany, Axel, Patrick, Kaylee, Yukio and that's all i can think of right now. We have a lot more though (Way too many if you ask me....

WARNING!!!!! the chapters are NOT in order!!! I just write random chapters in no particular order