My Annoying Sisters

Had I time to babysit my sisters.

They are twins, I cannot handle them mister.

They are naughty; they are evil.

They act like a weavil.

They make mess in my room.

They don't have to clean, so I have to take broom.

They are little naughty rats,

Running around our house mats.

 

But I won't because I have to work.

I am not going to look after them, 'cause I am not a jerk.

I had to bake cakes,

Instead of making myself stakes.

I am going to be in danger,

If you put me with these strangers.

I am not looking after these eagles,

'Cause they are evil.

 

Therefore, I am going to chat.

Sitting in my room, cuddling my cat.

I will go for shopping,

Rather than doing mopping.

My friends would be waiting for me.

So had to hurry and quick to see.

I'll have a perfect day,

If I not look after them, I say.

Author's Note

Dedicated to my twin sisters (non-identical)
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Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

Love it!! lol That was so much fun to read. Your every word tells me that you should be writing children's stories and using these moments in your life as inspiration. : ) I didn't get the middle of the poem. Maybe, jobs are strange over there where people make "stakes" for like railroads and machines or something. I'm out of the loop on such things. : ) This is the line: "Instead of making myself stakes" Favorited!! Love it!! xoxo -Mark

[Anonymous Girl]

Well you can say that, lol, and thanks again, I am glad you like it :)

[luviva]

real good stuff
it ryhms, the structure is spot on and the imagery of them making a mess en running here and there is strong!!
pary they dont read this coz they might smuck you!!

[Anonymous Girl]

LOL!!! They did read it and they couldn't get what I was talking about xD
Thanks for the review :)

[luviva]

ohh poor them!

[Anonymous Girl]

As I said... They aren't but a Queens of Evil...

[Acropolix]

I hope your parents will not look similarly to taking care of your twin sisters... Anyways! It has a good flow and rhythm, which makes it easy to understand. Nice work, you managed to set the mood right from the beginning and kept it up all through the poem. Just one note, I am not sure eagles and evil are perfect rhyme but that's just me crying about the little details... Nice work again.

[Anonymous Girl]

Yeah I was guessing that too when I did the rhyming... But thanks for the review :)

[luviva]

ohhh poor them!!

[Anonymous Girl]

Haha! Don't call them poor... They are Queens of evil!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Hehe, awesome writing here, and annoying as they seem, I can tell you love them, nice work :D

[Anonymous Girl]

Thank you ^^ and I do love them =)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

ha ha....i wonder if they (each twin) repsonded differently to the poem? I mean laughed or defended themselves at different points? too young still perhaps.

[Anonymous Girl]

They arew 8 and when I read this poem to them both of them joined each other and went against me. =D Thanks for reading. :)