A Star

A Star

A Poem by Anonymous Girl

I am watching,

What looks like,

A star.

Burning brightly,

Above us.

A thousand light years

Away from us.

What would it look like,

From up close?

The colour, the shape.

What gases would it be

Burning?

I am sitting

On the grass

Watching it sparkle.

A billion, billion miles

Away.

Wondering,

How big would it be?

I am watching it,

From the garden

Looking at how it

Sparkles.

© 2012 Anonymous Girl


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Very pretty!! How cute is this? ......and who gets to share such a spot by you in this very garden? Very pretty..... xoxo -Mark

Posted 6 Years Ago


Patrick Henry

6 Years Ago

It's 3:15am here. Are you in my future? xoxo -Mark
Anonymous Girl

6 Years Ago

Oh my God! And you are still awake? Its 8.20 pm here and I'm in my college at the moment.
Patrick Henry

6 Years Ago

lol Yeah, I'm awake! I never really sleep. Maybe between 6am and 8:30am or so? : ) So, you ARE in my.. read more
awe.. pretty. i wonder the same things when i gaze out upon the stars.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Anonymous Girl

6 Years Ago

Thanks for the review :)
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Pax
I'm getting wishful reading this...which is great..."looking at how it sparkles"

Posted 6 Years Ago


Anonymous Girl

6 Years Ago

Thanks for the review :):):)
Like a scientific version of twinkle twinkle little star, nicely done! I see a girl staring up at a particular star, maybe her star, and wondering what it would be like to meet that star while sitting under the night sky in a field.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Anonymous Girl

6 Years Ago

Well its also because of red shift. You know the expansion of universe. But you said it there all th.. read more
RachelReaper

6 Years Ago

Maybe that's your star
Anonymous Girl

6 Years Ago

Yeah.. may be :)
I liked this poem, its very happy and wishful... full of wonder. Great write!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Anonymous Girl

6 Years Ago

Thank you :)
It makes me feel happy, and generally I don't like things that seem all chopped up like this because they don't flow well in my mind but this actually used that really well and did flow well. I have to say I like looking at the stars so that's maybe why I'm happy :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Anonymous Girl

6 Years Ago

You too :)
KKBatoretto

6 Years Ago

I will :)
Anonymous Girl

6 Years Ago

:)
A lovely atmospheric piece. I can almost imaging a warm balmy evening of quiet contemplation. Soul serching and trying to make reason out of chaos. Good piece, flows well and good imagery.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Anonymous Girl

6 Years Ago

Thank you :)
I, too, am amazed by stars and their out of this world beauty and appreciate the fact that you have embodied all my thoughts in this poem even without knowing it. This is a perfect example where pieces of literature everybody's been thinking about but nobody writes about it but a single soul with the write words.

Well done

Posted 6 Years Ago


Anonymous Girl

6 Years Ago

Thank you :)
I definitely love stars.... And I wish I can hold one in my hands they seem so pretty from above.. I hate the Philippines' s sky today... We can't see the stars because it's raining that is extremely depressing... We are in the months when typhoons visit the country... It's unlucky for us to live near the Pacific Ocean...

Posted 6 Years Ago


Anonymous Girl

6 Years Ago

Ohh aww bless you. Don't worry you'll see a star soon enough, here isn UK its the same: cloudy and r.. read more
Rhianne Ney

6 Years Ago

yeah... the mist is such an antagonist... maybe if the Ber months come I will see one and I wish you.. read more
Anonymous Girl

6 Years Ago

You will and thank you :)
this is great, I have spent many an hour watching the stars...Makes you realise how small and insignificant we are......This poem reminds me of myself ALL those years ago. Thanks for that. No-one can comprehend the universe and its infinity

Posted 6 Years Ago


Anonymous Girl

6 Years Ago

Thanks for reading it and I am glad I reminded you of yourself all those years ago watching stars. A.. read more

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