Barefoot

 

Barefoot:

 

Barefoot we stumble, never quite prepared

and the outcome is, always changing our future steps

Like the roll of a dice, we never know which path to take

Then we find ourselves calling our best events destiny.

 

 

 

Reviews

[K. Aurora]

Oh very true! I'll take destiny or fate as long as it mean's I can continue to go barefoot in the soft grass. :)

This was very cute and held a valid look at the path on which we walk.

Nice poem!

Kansas

[K. Aurora]

Oh very true! I'll take destiny or fate as long as it mean's I can continue to go barefoot in the soft grass. :)

This was very cute and held a valid look at the path on which we walk.

Nice poem!

Kansas

[PoetryXpressions]

Short and sweet, but say's so much. I truly enjoyed this read. Thanks for sharing.

[dawnmarie]

nice job.. short and sweet

[Forest Green]

Nice lemon twist consideration of life, brought in a very small package.

I like the freshness of it very much.

Good Work!