Heroes

Heroes

A Poem by TamerQtaish
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Will they be forgotten?

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Heroes

Those with wings but never fly!
Dressed in armor, still they die!
Bringers of rain while their throats are dry.
Unseen. Unspoken but did you ever ask why?
Once gone would anyone cry?
Would you remember the name, would you even try?

© 2010 TamerQtaish


Author's Note

TamerQtaish
This is a short one! the idea was given by a friend of mine, he also helped in the title,
Thanks Black Iris

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to me... personally... this is a masterpiece... i loved it... this my personal favorite of yours!
it speaks so much of whats on your mind... a perception of the wrold we live in... and how we fade away and remembered... or aren't we?

keep 'em comin'

love and respect bro

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Short, sweet and too the point. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thanks everyone for their reviews,

The Back Iris:
I am happy you liked the poem bro,
Love and respect

Michael:
Thanks for the idea,
I think I will stick to my version, or if a rewrite do it in another style :P

Katseye:
Long time,
So tell me who does it remind you to?

All the best,
Tamer

Emma:
Hello Emma, thanks a lot for your kind words,
I was trying to say a story and set a point of view,
That's what I came up with at 4:00am
All the best regards,
Tamer



Posted 11 Years Ago


Short this might be but it says so much, your words are punctuated with real sadness because you ask a question that should need no asking. Now I wonder..

To leave a reader paused in life, thinking about the words you've written, shows their power.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good my friend. Reminds me of someone I know... wonder who...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, I really liked this poem alot, because it makes the reader remember
the cause, I agree brilliantly done- the rhyme form is and wording strikes a noticable understanding. if i may really look for a critique, i
merely boiled down what you've written and corrected a slight timing issue
what do you think?

Heroes have wings but never fly!
Dressed in armor still they die.
Bringer of rain while their throats are dry.
Unseen. Unspoken but did you ever ask why?
Once gone will anyone cry?
Will you remember their life?
Will you even try?


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

to me... personally... this is a masterpiece... i loved it... this my personal favorite of yours!
it speaks so much of whats on your mind... a perception of the wrold we live in... and how we fade away and remembered... or aren't we?

keep 'em comin'

love and respect bro

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 22, 2010
Last Updated on September 4, 2010
Tags: Heroes, Names, Remember

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TamerQtaish
TamerQtaish

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