Father

Father

A Poem by TamerQtaish

Father

Father! You and I didn't always agree
I might have charged blindly
But its you who drove me angry
Watching me grow with scars on this body
Where were you before this monster grew too strongly?

Father! I am not here to argue
Somethings we can't redo
So don't ask me why I choose red over blue!
Angels might not love me like they do you!
Pointing fingers, my life isn't for you to preview

Father! If you really care
Why did you even start the dare?
Too many demons for me to bare
I might not have played by your rules but I played fair!
And now its me who doesn't really give a care!

© 2010 TamerQtaish


Author's Note

TamerQtaish
Thanks for the typo Micheal!

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You clearly demonstrate why I wouldn't ever use dad and father as interchangeable. You've defiantly described a father. Dads are much more supportive and caring, at least to me. I've had both in my life. A dad who guided me and helped me when things got hard, and the father who tried to break me.

Very well said my dear.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I agree with Katseye (see below). The fact that you use father instead of dad speaks volume. But it is a great piece because first one can sense the intense feelings underneath the words, and yet, second, the piece is fluent and comfortable to read! You do know to express yourself!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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what the hell?
jesus... you're talking POETRY!
not lyrics... Poetry! amazing poetry!
Amazing...
i love it!
no really... i love it!
amazing

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

its the love..

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You clearly demonstrate why I wouldn't ever use dad and father as interchangeable. You've defiantly described a father. Dads are much more supportive and caring, at least to me. I've had both in my life. A dad who guided me and helped me when things got hard, and the father who tried to break me.

Very well said my dear.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow. absolutely well written passion, i mean very nice job
I like the way it speaks clearly. and with conviction.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 12, 2010
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