Two bad knees

Two bad knees

A Poem by TamerQtaish

With two bad knees

And a head full of memories

You know you have been here for a while

Some might argue about your intentions and lifestyle


Between here and there

Who are they?

For all you should really care

You lived life your way


In this life you lived

You learned a thing or two

Things that simply got you more confused

It’s madness to make sense of that black and blue


Beaten, broken and scarred

Still you order another round

Picking up after falling so hard

Is there hope or are you drowned?


It might be just a foolish hope

And when people ask you to quit

You smile and simply say ‘nope’

But for a while now, things don’t seem to fit


You carry on in life’s extremes

Filled with lies and broken dreams

With a head full of memories

And two bad knees

© 2012 TamerQtaish

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F**k me up with this ! One of my favorite ones on this site so far for sure

Posted 5 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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You seemed like as if you suffered a lot in this life!!

However, I hope you will overcome every challenge that blocs your way.

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

No actually, its about me! I have two bad knees... And been through lots lately

Posted 11 Years Ago

This is awesome! Is this dedicated to your grandfather or someone? I like the way the that he never gives up, in spite of sorrows and failures. Great job on this one.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on March 22, 2012
Last Updated on March 22, 2012



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