Lies

Cinquain

 

 

 

 

Like dirt

on clean kissed skin

some lies do not need words to tell

a look can do it everytime

love hurts

Reviews

[Darien Thomas Bragg]

What a fantastic poem!
The rhythm makes me think of a heartbeat or pulse quickening and then levelling off again.

[just is]

So true and so wonderful
well said here

[angelina neves]

beutiful!

[Tas]

short and sweet and true

[Seracies]

Very true. With so little words you expressed worlds. Vivid and brutal from dirt to clean skin. Lovely poem.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Well done and soooo ture.