It's all your fault!

It's all your fault!

A Poem by tanaya
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'bout my sister... sorry it does have some bad language sorry...

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You got away

Scot free

You going to do it again

. I know you are.

 

You’re a little s**t.

 A 'rebel' as you say,

you don’t care.

 

You do realise what your doing

 but you just don’t care…

 youll do it again and again and you don’t care.

 

 Break her heart

 again and again,

 and you don’t care

 

And I hate you

I hate you for it all

I hate it

 

I hate you when you talk

I hate you when you breath

I hate you when you ruin our family

 

Don’t you get it?

We all hate you

Even if it’s a little bit

 

You’ve driven your family away

With your abuse and cruelty

You’ve driven away your family

 

What have you done?

Are you happy?

I hope your content

 

Because of you

Our family is broken

Its fallen apart

 

Because of you

I hope you got what you want

Cause we have nothing left

 

Go away

Leave me alone

Get out of my life!

 

I don’t want you!

No one does really!

Your just an obligation

 

Its your fault!

Your fault we are broken

Your fault we are nothing

© 2012 tanaya


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KT
We all feel like this sometimes, don't we? Kudos to you for writing about it, letting it out and not holding it in till it rips you apart. That's what I did (still do), and I'm still recovering. I hope your family mends itself (and each other, for that matter). Stay strong!

Posted 11 Years Ago


those are the same words I feel to say when also had a quarrel
anyway, good thing you just put it in writing and not blow it off
for real
this writing is very powerful
=]

Posted 11 Years Ago


I read this quite superficially, it speaks well of emotions and clever uses of repition, but there is no real depth to the story. These emotions might make more of an impact if accompanied by a reason specific, then it could be applied and understood as oppose to just aiming for people to understand. I hope you understand what I mean. Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I see a misunderstood child being tormented over the ordeals of adults.Only desireing to be loved while blame is all he recieves.Sad but well written

Posted 12 Years Ago


A very powerful and sad poem. Hard when someone try to create chaos and problems in a family. Sometime somebody need to be the person who bring calm and hope to the family. Anger lead to more people with broken hearts. Thank you for the powerful poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Deadly.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is intense and it has so many raw emotions in it. While reading this I felt as if i was witnessing a person yelling this to someone else, I didnt feel like I was just reading a poem. That's what makes this piece so strong. This is a wonderful write, amazing job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow! I'm very sorry about your sister. I could feel the emotion just pour out as I read every word and every stanza until the end. Wonderful write!

~Lizzy~

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow!!! You dislike her very strongly. Felt like you were standing infront of a mirror and yelling with rage at the reflection within the mirror...like feeling your way through reasons..I read the top that said it was about your sister, of course, but it just felt like you were screaming to a mirror. (not sure why I picture that in my head) Packs a puch that's for sure...I'm sorry you're feeling and having to go through this...but well stated emotional power from your inner anger felt throughout this piece. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


a lot of raw emotion.. you did well keeping the language simple as a child would rage against an adult.. well done..

Posted 12 Years Ago



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