What really defines  me ?🤔

What really defines me ?🤔

A Poem by Taniska 😊😊

What really defines me?

Some calls me selfish.
Some calls me selfless.
Some refers me bad .
but some refers me good.

What really defines me?
Some criticize me for my habits.
Some encourage me for my works.
some ignored me for some reason.
But some refers am special for my
nature.

What really defines me?

Some try to be my friend.
some try to be my enemy.
some try to share everything with me.
But Some try to hide everything from
me.

How can I really define me ?

I don't know what really defines me but
I only know that each and every person
of this world has been born for some
reason may be that's true for me too .

© 2018 Taniska 😊😊


Author's Note

Taniska  😊😊
Pls read it and if you like it then share your feelings.

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I really like this. It's very true and I'm surprised a girl at your age has so much insight. You're wise beyond your years, my dear. I like the self-awareness here, and the lines about how people might view you, bad or good, positive or negative. I really like the encouraging and strong message at the end; that we all are here for a reason.
Great poem!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kerdiwen Glass

5 Years Ago

You're very welcome
7's

5 Years Ago

i knew these things when i wasn't even 5; fibbing for praising; it's a writing communitee doesn't me.. read more
Kerdiwen Glass

5 Years Ago

You knew these things when you weren't even five? Whoa. You want a sticker? Gold star? Pat on the b.. read more



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I really like this. It's very true and I'm surprised a girl at your age has so much insight. You're wise beyond your years, my dear. I like the self-awareness here, and the lines about how people might view you, bad or good, positive or negative. I really like the encouraging and strong message at the end; that we all are here for a reason.
Great poem!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kerdiwen Glass

5 Years Ago

You're very welcome
7's

5 Years Ago

i knew these things when i wasn't even 5; fibbing for praising; it's a writing communitee doesn't me.. read more
Kerdiwen Glass

5 Years Ago

You knew these things when you weren't even five? Whoa. You want a sticker? Gold star? Pat on the b.. read more
Your message presents some very good questions about life & about defining one's self. As I read, I was thinking: WE DEFINE OURSELVES! DON'T LET OTHERS DEFINE YOU! But you are only 15, so it's hard not to pay attention to how other people try to define you. You use many good examples & specifics to SHOW instead of tell (first rule of good writing). We can see how the narrator is feeling confused about whether to believe this person or that person, as far as what people say about her.

Your phrase "refers to me" is correctly used, but it might be stronger & clearer to say "defines me" in some spots here & there. Your English does sound a little bumpy & I'll make some suggestions below if you want to make any changes (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

WHAT YOU WROTE --> SUGGESTION FOR CLEARER ENGLISH
What really refers to me? --> What really defines me?
Some calls me am selfish. --> Some call me selfish
Some calls me am selfless. --> Some call me selfless
Some refers me am bad . --> Some refer to me as bad
but some refers me am good. --> but some refer to me as good.

What really refers to me? --> What really defines me?
Some tries to be my friend. --> Some try to be my friend.
some tries to be my enemy. --> Some try to be my enemy.
some tries to share everything with me. --> Some try to share everything . . .
But Some tries to hide everything from me. --> But some try to hide everything . . .
what really refers to me? --> How can I really define myself?

I don't know what really refers to me but
I only know that each and every person
of this world had took born for some --> of this world has been born for some
reason may be I have also. --> reason, maybe that's true for me too.



Posted 5 Years Ago


Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

I really appreciate your support and thanks for advising me Mam (((((smiles)))))😊😊😊😊�.. read more
Awesome poem. True words and good flow. Everyone has an opinion or perseves us differently. We never really will no ourselves till we truly live our lives. We will never understand ourselves. We are unpredictable and beautiful and broken. I loved it. I hope what I said made sense lol 😄
Stay golden my friend 💛
-Angelina 🖤

Posted 5 Years Ago


Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

Thanx Angelina for reading my poem and your words are also very heart touching ,loved it (smiles) �.. read more
A.G.

5 Years Ago

You are very welcome my friend 😊💛
-Angelina
this is a sweet poem i most enjoyed. :D (smiles)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

Thanx for reading (smiles) 😊.
Interesting read, and we know what we are all about character wise as we develope and age and the chooses we make in our daily life and mix with others.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

Thanx for reading 😊.
Yes, who knows what we are really all about
nicely written

Posted 5 Years Ago


Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

Thanx sir !!! 😊
and a good reason,i`m sure
and maybe it was for your writing

Posted 5 Years Ago


Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

Thanx for reading sir (smiles) 😄
 wordman

5 Years Ago

you are welcome
The way you express what refers to you is amazing ,I loved it keep writing😃😃😃

Posted 5 Years Ago


Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

Thanx for reading Rahul.😊
Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

It's" waiting " or " writing" 🤔.
Amada

5 Years Ago

Writing, auto correction 😂😂😁

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Added on September 19, 2018
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Taniska  😊😊
Taniska 😊😊

Cuttack, Odisha, India



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