Life

Life

A Poem by Taniska 😊😊
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Enjoy your life.

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Life is a puzzle,
Try to solve it.

Life is an adventure,
Try to enjoy it .

Life is a truth,
Try to belive it.

Life is a path,
Try to walk on it.

Life is a rule,
Try to follow it.

Life is a happiness,
Try to  feel it.

Life is everything thing for us so try to enjoy your life with full of joy and happiness without hurting others.

© 2018 Taniska 😊😊


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Simple but attractive..
Through simple words you have created a good and inspiring message.
Keep writing.


Posted 5 Years Ago


This is an honest way to inspire people! I like that your tone is encouraging, but you do not sound like you expect people to always be good at this. When you say "try to" -- it conveys the feeling that the narrator is understanding & tolerant, knowing that we can only try, but it might not always turn out that we are successful. I prefer inspirational poems that have a core of being honest & human (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

Thanx mam for reading it and your words are always heart touching (((smiles))) 😊😊😊😊😊.. read more
INTERESTING READ.WONDERFUL MORALS OF LIFE!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

Thanx siddhidatri for reading it . Keep smiling ( smiles )😄😄😄😄
This is such a lovely poem about life!
yes, it's true we really should appreciate and enjoy walking this path of life.
although for me it is very difficult to live life without hurting others.
hope I can achieve it someday..
amazing job Taniska!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

Thanx flowers of eternity for visiting my page ,and I glad that u like it ((smiles
Live life and enjoy it to the best of your ability. We aren't on this planet for long. I enjoyed your lines Taniska

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

Thanx mam for visiting my page and I also agree with u ( smiles)😄😄😄😄😄😄
I loved this. Totally agree with you on all statements. Wonderfully expressed. And thank you for sharing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

Thanx Dawn for visiting my page
(Smiles) 😊😊😊😊
Onlyme

5 Years Ago

my pleasure sweetheart. Excellent poem.
Can't disagree with anything in this.
Life is for living, live it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

Thanx sir for visiting my page and I glad that u like it ( smiles)😊😊😊😊

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Added on October 20, 2018
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Taniska  😊😊
Taniska 😊😊

Cuttack, Odisha, India



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I am a girl of 16 and I'm here to share my writings with you and also to accept your good suggestion. 😊 Keep smiling 😄😃🤣😆😉😊😀😁&.. more..

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