Game isnt over yet 🎮

Game isnt over yet 🎮

A Poem by Taniska 😊😊

Game isnt over yet .
What passed shall be repeated.
My body is broken .
But my soul is not defeated.

Different questions are coming
In front of me.
And making me weak.
By inside.

My life isnt over yet .
And I am not wreaked.
My courage ignites now.
And that's all I need.

Why am blaming ?
So, much for my habits.
And getting so much hate.
From others.

Game isnt over yet .
What passed shall be repeated.
My body is broken .
But my soul is not defeated.

© 2018 Taniska 😊😊


Author's Note

Taniska  😊😊
If u like it then share your feelings with me😄😄😄😄

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I cannot believe you are 15 . . . this sounds like I feel, at age 62! How can you be so wise already? You've crafted a poem that sounds like the vow of an older person, after the way life can beat a person up for 5 or 10 years straight. You're not even old enuf to know that. But you put it perfectly into your poem & I thank you for that. I have to remind myself of this every day (I'm disabled). You're the best! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

Thanx a lot Mam this is the most beautiful review that I have seen. I really admires you always *sm.. read more
I like that although things could be much better, you are determined not to suffer total defeat. Your body may be broken but your spirit isn't. That's a strong message.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

Thank you Mam for your kind review . (Smiles) 😊😊
I love the message of your poem, saying that even if blades are pointing at you, fear, doubt, discouragement, disappointments,and even if your body is broken, you will not give in, the game is not over yet, you can still continue on with life. Although there are some wrong grammars and missing words, it is still understandable and you have a creative way of writing. Job well done. Hoping to read more.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

Thanx mam for visiting my page ,and I will try to correct my grammatical mistakes . ((Smiles )) 😊.. read more
Heart touching poem tanu as usual 😊😊😊

Posted 5 Years Ago


Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

Thanx RB for visiting my page (((smiles))) 😊😊😊😊
The inner doubt and beliefs of not letting anyone break your spirit, heart, mind and soul. Wrapped inside a nice motivational poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Taniska  😊😊

5 Years Ago

Thanx Dawn for reading my poem an also thanks for your kind words (((smiles))) 😊😊😊😊

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Added on November 18, 2018
Last Updated on November 18, 2018
Tags: Games, bravery, challenges

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Taniska  😊😊
Taniska 😊😊

Cuttack, Odisha, India



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I am a girl of 16 and I'm here to share my writings with you and also to accept your good suggestion. 😊 Keep smiling 😄😃🤣😆😉😊😀😁&.. more..

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