A Girl

A Girl

A Poem by Taniska 😊😊

What will you feel ?

If you will meet a girl ,
Who has no sense.

What will you feel ?

If you will find a girl
Who is a fool .

What will you feel ?

If u will meet a girl ,
Who is very bad in friendship.

What will you feel ?

If you will meet a girl ,
Who always use to fight with others.

"Tell the truth "

© 2019 Taniska 😊😊


Author's Note

Taniska  😊😊
Tell me the truth that what you feel about this girl !!

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if we skip 'bad in friendship': i can actually relate it to like girls, truly.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Wow this poem spoke to me in a time of need. I know you weren't talking to me but I felt like you where. Just what I needed.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Taniska  😊😊

8 Months Ago

Aaa sorry as u are my new friend . So it is quite difficult to talk to you and I really don't know w.. read more
i really like this poem and i feel i can relate to some of the characteristics you described about the girl lol :D i feel if i met a girl like this, i would be there for them and try to understand them more. i would feel hopeful...i loved it. thank you for sharing Taniska!
-Angelina

Posted 9 Months Ago


Taniska  😊😊

8 Months Ago

Thanx Angelina for visiting my page your words touched my heart so thanks a lot .(( Smiles)) 😊.. read more
Angelina 🖤

8 Months Ago

Smiles, your welcome and same here. your poem touched me as well :D
I would try to talk to them and understand them and help them. As they sound lonely and sad and lack self-esteem. That is just me though. Everyone is different in this vast world. Nice interesting thoughtful poem.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Taniska  😊😊

8 Months Ago

Thanx a lot mam for visiting my page and that's sweet of you . ((Smiles )) 😊😊😊😊
Dawn

8 Months Ago

my pleasure sweetheart.
In my younger days, I would've been sympathetic, becuz I was drawn to misfits. Now I have no time or patience for people who are no good at being a friend. Your poem could describe me, since I'm no good at being a friend either. As I get older, I don't want to work at being friends! If it doesn't come naturally, I'm gone. I admire you for coming up with interesting ideas in your writing. This one brings up good discussion! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 9 Months Ago


Taniska  😊😊

8 Months Ago

Same here mam am also not good in making freinds like this girl but still I have such freinds like y.. read more
Everybody feels differently. No two people feel the same. Your lines speak to me of someone who has no self esteem. There are some of us out here who would try and help that girl see the goodness inside her which she is too afraid to let out. Friends bring out the best in people. That's what I think Taniska. All good wishes.

Chris

Posted 9 Months Ago


Taniska  😊😊

9 Months Ago

Thanx mam . I wanna tell you onething that she is one of my freind.And today I find her in tears an.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

9 Months Ago

Find out why she is in pain. She is, and support her. Be a friend who can help her see again that li.. read more
Taniska  😊😊

9 Months Ago

Thank u mam I will try !!

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Taniska  😊😊
Taniska 😊😊

Cuttack, Odisha, India



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