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I have come to know love is fleeting

Just a breath after an amorous greeting

With the blink of my lustful eye

Moments between hello and goodbye

Are bodies indulged to deep pink blush

Harried and horny in a violent rush

Satiated to a place of dissatisfaction

Concupiscent overstated attraction

Reviews

[roarke]

That was the most intellectual, cerebral and erotic limerick I've ever read.... lol. "Harried and Horny in a violent rush" Niiiiice. More please.

[Crow]

So much said in this short, yet eloquent poem about a human emotion.

[Charles]

love's eternal...its lust that is fleeting.
nice use og BIG words without being over brainy (i know it ain't a word, but i like it)
:)

[Dream Weaver]

So beautifully penned, it's such a shame that alot of people feel this way.
This write is so small but speaks volumes in matters of the heart..

[loowzerX]

Perfect rhyme scheme :)

[Hello, Goodbye]

Love the brevity and imagery.