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UPSET!!

UPSET!!

A Poem by Tas
"

My name was called when it was not me and i am quite upset

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Why do people open their mouth?

When they are not sure

Does it let them feel

Less insecure?

 

If that’s the case

Don’t use my name

Get your facts

 

Next time it might not be so simple

What if someone was getting whacked?

You would just call my name

With no little shame

That you’re not sure

 

What you think you are so pure

I’m not why you’re insecure

Think next time before you open your mouth

 

Cause next time

Instead of my name

Being drag through the dirt

It will be your mouth filled with it

© 2009 Tas


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well ..I have to say..I relate to this..I know someone who often opens their mouth ..sometimes you just got to move away from those kind of people those who need to make other feel small when maybe they are actually the small ones and should eat their own dirt.

Posted 13 Years Ago


my feelings entirely...well done...thanks
Babsie Bee xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


you are a pshycho
I like it

Posted 13 Years Ago


Hmmm... I like it. Nice rant. Writing tends to keep the fuse from getting too short I think. I determined long ago that the only reason someone would have for talking (gossiping) about another is if they are unhappy with themselves. Of course, I'm not a psychologist... but then, who really is?

Anywho.... well done! Great rhyme and flow. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Can I print this off and pass it around my office? Lol! Wonderful, well-written poem. You said what I think alot of us have felt at times.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Man I think i speak for alot of people when i say man I wish i would have had the chance to say this to many people! wonderful rant! LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice little rant here. It sounds like somebody Peed in your wheaties The day you wrote this. LOL
Later Debby

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 6, 2009

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Tas
Tas

Kingston, Jamaica



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