The Walls

The Walls

A Poem by Tas
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The breaking down walls

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The walls that we both built

To keep people out

To avoid the hurt

 

Over this time

That we have spent together

The walls have slowly crumbled

 

We both stand here

Free, out in the open

Trusting each other

 

But these walls don’t stay down

They rise once again

But this time it’s different

 

It is not blocking you from me

Or even me from you

No those days are over

 

These walls block us in

They are built around us

They are keeping us safe

 

Blocking out the rest of the world

Those that mean us no good

Just us trusting and loving each other

© 2009 Tas


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..its description.................you could use fewer words.....
and the meaning has come straight through as you didnt want more to be said.................to the point!


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this poem because I love the walls that I build to keep people out so that i can't get get hurt. You did a very good job of expressing the feelings in the poem, I will add it to my favorite

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it's a sweet poem..i like it

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice poem about safety
and being comforted in each others
presence this is a great poem of
friendship and I loved it

Great work!

Orlando M

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hmmmm. well critique aside i can completely relate to this poem. my wife and i have done pretty much exactly this.



Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

exilent write how you tear down the walls of hate and distrust justto rebuild the walls of love

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

those are the kind of walls worth building... life can cause so much hurt and mistrust it is good when you find someone to share that safe place with.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tas
Tas

Kingston, Jamaica



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