The night brightness

The night brightness

A Poem by Tasfia Islam
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Your smile is the symbol of brightness, so it make everything bright....doesnt matter if it day or night, Christmas or famine, war or peace....1 perfect smile can ruin every sadness within a spark..

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Sparks fly, light beams in the sky
Comets and shooting stars shine in the high

Galaxies of shining stars take our eyes away
In their reflection, the muddy pies shine all way

Dark shadows under the tree and moon image in the pond
Takes our heart and the wonderful nature and forms in a bond

These are the beauties of the night
And the darkest time of our daily sight

Now i wonder, deeply for a while,
When darkness have such beauties, y do we wait for the brightness to smile???

© 2014 Tasfia Islam


Author's Note

Tasfia Islam
i dnt knw if u guys will like it or not, i just wanted to put an art of happiness in this poem and drive all of ur sadness though it.....hope u will enjoy it......

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another nice poem from you Annabelle. Beautiful it is, keep it up...:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Tasfia Islam

5 Years Ago

Thank you.... :)
Its really mesmerizing. I wanted to read more but it ended soon :(

Posted 5 Years Ago


Tasfia Islam

5 Years Ago

This is the suspense of poetry..... your thirst never stops in reading more and more.... :)
scarlet azalea

5 Years Ago

true!!!!!!
You are officially a poetry GOD in my eyes. your writing is 100 percent unique and i can tell you put Lots of effort into your beautiful, no, majestic, wait, DIVINE poetry!

Posted 5 Years Ago


DoormanDan

5 Years Ago

Oh, and happy early birthday!
Tasfia Islam

5 Years Ago

Oh My God..... This is the best review I ever got....... Thank you sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo mu.. read more
DoormanDan

5 Years Ago

No problem!
I like the any you have the poem set up.
It's a great poem!
Well done!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Wonderful Vision Maam and U ended it so well.
When darkness have such beauties, y do we wait for the brightness to smile???
Nice

Posted 5 Years Ago


Tasfia Islam

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much..... I'm glad u liked it.... :)
Nitesh Mahabal

5 Years Ago

hhhhmmmmm :)
Ah.. The brightness of the night, brought alive.. :).. There was a time when I used to stare at the endless sky, studded with stars and dream.. No time now-a-days ...

I think there is one minor spelling mistake..
"When darkness have such beauties, y do we wait for the brightness to smile???"
Shouldn't it be "has"? :P.

A really good write.. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Tasfia Islam

5 Years Ago

Thanks to inform me about the correction.... :) And I'm really glad that u liked it..... :)
Hey Annabelle this is great keep up the good work

Posted 5 Years Ago


Tasfia Islam

5 Years Ago

thank you very much... :)
Very true, the peaceful beauty of the night...I like how you've expressed that in this piece ;)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Tasfia Islam

5 Years Ago

Thank you.... :)
its really good, your imagination power is great..........

Posted 5 Years Ago


Tasfia Islam

5 Years Ago

thankyou so much......

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I'm a girl......just a girl with lot of characters....I passed 15 years of my life and felt the sweetness and bitterness of this teenage.......Soon, i'll be 16 yrs......a lot of things are waiting for.. more..

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