The lucky me.... :)

Learning to lead an unlucky life within a single day

So, just a usual morning......wake up from bed, have a boring breakfast and then school......and where else??....school is the one and only place where i go , well, sorry, Aunt Sally is also there....twice in a week, i go to meet her....and u know y?....to take her dog for a walk....yep!!! this is me... Unlucky me.... I almost stay the whole day at home, not because i love home like home, home, sweet home....haha,....the reason is i don't have any place to go....No friends, no boyfriend, no hangovers, no ice cream party, absolutely nothing.....I'm just a lil piece of boring s**t.....Well, the most important thing,,, my family. So, I have a lil family....its me, my brother and my sweet parents...Of coarse, they are sweet but just not when they talk to me....sometimes it feels like, I'm a big burden for my parents,,,, yes....it hurts, it hurts a lot....But no, i dnt cry,,,, because I'm used to this....Anyways, there's someone else...my bro who loves me more than anything and trusts me more than he trusts himself....so, I'm definitely a lucky girl only in this case....Well, that day at school was not a typical day.....its like, something just.....happened...with no plans at all....!!! I was rushing to school after the bell rang, as usual, late again....."What the hell" i said to myself....can u believe? i just crashed with our principal....And now, yellow card!!..not because I crushed with him...its because, i yelled a slang word....So, this is how it proves that I'm unlucky at a high stage.... I had no intentions to say a slang infront of principal...but i did....this is called bad luck....I mean seriously, how can someone be so unfortunate?? like hell!!....and that someone is me....Well, getting a yellow card and all of this rubbish incident is not the reason of making it a different day, cuz these things are so uncommon.....things like this keeps happening with me.....So, the unusual thing that happened..... Well, after the break, I was sitting alone in the basketball court...I love basketball but no one really plays with me....I just dnt understand why..... What did i ever do to anyone....:(.......And there comes Freddy....OMG!!!I cant believe my own eyes...He is the basketball champion of this year and the coolest boy of the school on whom i had crush a 1000 times, and he's coming towards me??? am I dreaming??.....nope, I'm not...He is coming towards me but not to me....yes, it makes a difference :(.....He came to pick up the ball which was right behind me....But but but.....as i told something unexpected happened...."hey" yelled Freddy with a soft voice right beside my ear....I was  like, STATUE.....Awwwwhhhh....it was a lovely feeling....No one ever talked so sweetly with me. Wait, he just said hey, what else.....And so i said, "hi Freddy"....he hold my shoulder and started to say something...he said, " Ann, I always wanted to say u something, ummmm.....i was scared thinking what will be ur reply,,,, but now, I cant keep it in myself anymore.....So,....ummmm.....I love you...... well, yes i do....and I'm so sry that I never told it....I love ur everything....the way u talk, ur insanity, and the way u think that u r unlucky and make that sad face, but u knw what?...for me, its super cute.....U know y r u unlucky?....Cuz u gave me all of ur luck And thats y u became unlucky.....I'm lucky cuz I have u in my hands right now......and because I cud recognize ur real beauty when no one else did.....i know that everyone hates u...but u know what Ann?.... I love u....And if u can take me as ur world, then the whole world loves u.....no one knows .....But I knw u and thats y I love you.....So,...???          "Of coarse..... yes yes yes.... I love u too and i always did....I whispered.


So, thats how my life changed..... A perfect day made my life perfect....I don't feel unlucky and unfortunate anymore....... And now, I love myself and proud of who I am....

Author's Note

This is a story of a girl named Ann......Read and review....hope u will like it... :)

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

Highschool sweetheart stuff makes the world go around wish I was still back there most of my life is spent now but I must like in the present and watch the grandkids grow they are lots of fun you know. But so was young girls and High School without a care. Nice read Happy endings are what Its all about. Smile goes a long way ;)

[Tasfia Islam]

I'm glad u liked it.... :) Thank you... :)

[Moomal Ahmed]

its a nice story and yea its cute as well, but there are a few grammatical issues and the love part is a little abrupt...otherwise its nice and sentimental, i loved it

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you... :)

[Fariha Tahseen Karim]

nice story. More like a diary. Instead of saying crashed with the principle you could have said bumped. That's sounds better. But really cute and amazing writing. I loved it

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you.... :)

[Fariha Tahseen Karim]

my pleasure....

[Ryan Henderson]

I like this poem very much, I too, am very, VERY unlucky, It seems as though fortune has a bone to pick with my innermost spirit... Since you are 15 and I'm 14, we can relate on somewhat of a similar level in writing, I look forward to reading more. :)

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you Ryan.... :) I'm glad that you liked it.... I'll surely continue writing,,,,inspired by these wonderful reviews..... And yep, we do have similar level of writing i guess....And, I must say, you are also a very good writer ..... :) Once again, thanks for the review

[Ryan Henderson]

thank you, my pleasure ;)

[Abhishekizy]

Aw that was cute. You are every inch a cute lil teenager, Annabelle. I know your character is not you, but her thought are entirely yours. Love the way you sound with its feelings. Now here girl, I would love to read more of you on lot of various topics. 'love' is essentially a topic which every teenager feels comfortable talking about, its their forte. I would love to see something which you write out of your comfortable skin!!

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you very much.... :) I'm glad u liked it and gave such a lovely review....I'll surely continue writing ........till the end of time.... :) Only a wonderful writer can understand the creativity and art of another writer, so I must say, u must be a great writer.... :)

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Story Of A Girl Named Ann!!! Said By A Girl Named Annabelle.
Well Writers Of Any kind Are usually isolated coz they love their Thought so no harm in being different than others. Even I dont hav a social life.
Ur story was sweet. A lil Filmy ill say, but i was curious to where it was going and that got me interested. it was good. college love or first love experience kindda feeling. well done

[Tasfia Islam]

Thanks a lot..... And, Ann is not Annabelle.... :) No connection between me and the girl... And I'm glad that u liked it... :)

[Nitesh Mahabal]

hahahahaha.... I understand that

[alyssaruth_3]

This is an adorable little story. The "..." could have been reduced a little bit to make the reading a little bit easier to follow, but overall, it's a great story. You can really relate to Ann. Good job :)

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you.....I'll definitely quit using "..." in my writings.... thanks for the advice

[Pushkar Prabhat]

'.......' and 'lil' 'ur' is annoying.
don't hate me...........and also not your parents...........you are just a teenager!!!
it felt like a page from my own old diary.......but this one have some words mis-spelt like crushed should have been crashed.
overall, it's enjoyable lil story!!!
always be proud of yourself......don't let anyone's comments make you feel any less.
:)

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you for the advice......I'll check it from next time... :)

[Tasfia Islam]

And, I don't hate my parents.... :) As I already told, its just a story....not my life story.....I love my parents.....And, I don't really hate anyone..... :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

that was just a joke............i hope i didn't offend you much......... :) :)

[Tasfia Islam]

nope.... :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Awesome!!!

[Tasfia Islam]

:)

[Matching Socks]

I love a story with a happy ending, it's cute but I think you could make it better by using less of "..."
and by spelling out the full words, because instead of 'cuz', you are or your instead of 'ur'.
Always good to spell check as well.

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you for the advice....I'll surely edit it....

[Matching Socks]

You're welcome Annabelle.