Its not a sin!!!

Fell free to know the actual definition of love....

Distance never fades love rather it makes it strong...
I'm so deeply bound to it that sometimes I think what if I'm doing wrong?

But love is not a sin
Neither its pulling something wrong in....

Its just a beautiful feeling from the heart
That probably purifies a person and cleans up the dirt

But not every people is bornt to understand the beauty of love
Those few love dipped people earn wings to fly like a dove

Love is like rain
When it goes away, heart fills with pain...

And when it starts in weight
The heart goes in the best state

Love is when u can only control the systole,
And someone else does the diastole of ur heart
This is the way how the two love birds never gets apart....

Author's Note

please read and review.....

Reviews

[ANTO]

Let me say - first off - its a fine, heartfelt (pardon the pun), exploration of the theme 'if it feels so good - how could it be wrong '. The image choice is inspired too. A whole art package.

Annabelle I think there is a typo in 'Neither its ' was it meant to read 'Neither is' ?
The heart function - its dependence - one on the other - is sublime, inventive and cool.

The final line is a bit higgeldy-piggeldy. I often find when I post, that I rush the end and publish in the excitement of the moment, maybe thats what occurred here.
HTH
:)

[Tasfia Islam]

yep, neither is. Glad u liked it.... thank you.... :)

[ANTO]

and the final line - (u=you're going to hate me lol) - does it need polishing ?
:)

[Tasfia Islam]

haha.....actually yes, i was also confused for this last line...but couldn't find a better ending..... i'll surely think about it...

[ANTO]

"Perhaps the is why two love birds
never part." - Im going to go before you kick me out - :)

[Tasfia Islam]

haha....no, its nice... :) but , the is why? is that, that is why?

[ANTO]

touche - laughing out loud here - yes it is Annabelle - great craic - thanks for the lol

[Tasfia Islam]

no problem.... :) :D

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and amazing description of love.
"Love is like rain
When it goes away, heart fills with pain...

And when it starts in weight
The heart goes in the best state"
Love had peaks and valleys. Good to know them both. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tasfia Islam]

:) I'm glad u liked it..... Thank you

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

This is simply amazing!!!!! I love all your work, honestly!

[Tasfia Islam]

Aww....thank you... :) And I love yours...

[Valkyrie Warrior]

:)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[SmittyJas]

This is the true meaning of love well written by a true poetress

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you so much... :)

[Fariha Tahseen Karim]

oooohhhhh... I love it sweetie

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you.... :)

[Fariha Tahseen Karim]

ur welcome

[Moomal Ahmed]

OMG!! i heartily wish i could write like that!!!!!!
:) :) :)

[Tasfia Islam]

Awwww.... U do write better than this I'm sure.... I'm glad u liked it.... :)

[Ryan Henderson]

Very good poem, I like the concept, keep writing!

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you..... :)

[Abhishekizy]

My favorite line in this piece would be:

But love is not a sin
Neither its pulling something wrong in....

Keep writing Anna!!

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you.... And I'll surely keep writing till the end of time.....not because u told me but because I will and I want to.....Its like writing poetry is the best thing in life.... expressing the inner message in words.....literature is really amazing....And I must say, u r also a very good writer....once again, thanks for the review.... :)

[Jennie Baron]

This is a charming and lovely poem, Annabelle. One reason I'm reviewing is I especially liked "Love is when u can only control the systole,/And someone else does the diastole of ur heart." It is truly necessary for lovers to complement each other. Nice romantic writing!

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you.... It means a lot to me.... And please don't refuse to tell me about my faults and mistakes in writing so that I can improve my skills gradually.... :)

[Isaiah Jacob Barber]

it's a lovely poem and has strong words. its quite nice

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you.... :)