You

One day I mean the world to you, the next day just a hi.

The following days u ignore me and leave me alone to cry..

I remember all those vows u made, well u called them promises.

Today life has taught me a lesson that infinite love leaves nothing but deep heart bruises..

Am I torn apart? No, I'm not. I just became invisible in your eyes,

Shattered and exhausted, standing alone, hearing all the playbacks of ur lies..

Your eyes' so pure, words' so smooth, no one can ever doubt,

Your tricky challenge of winning my heart left me thinking what was it all about?

You are a strong man but don't think I'm any less,

I have a strong eraser to wipe away all your mess..

I'm being honest, I've fallen in love with you, and I believe that its not a disease,

Cuz I will always love u even if u fold my heart and create a thousand crease..

Author's Note

Wrote this after a huge gap... Let me know how is it..

Reviews

[ANTO]

The end word is a stretch but hey thats all I can say thats not positive so its 99.99% positive.

I like the defiant learn-from-my-mistakes tone and the unbeaten sentiment.
Their loss as far as i can see.
Welcome back

[Tasfia Islam]

Yeah, u got me... I tried to give a negative threat with a positive saying. Rest is on the reader's personal thinking.. :) And I guess, u got me 100% . Glad u liked it... And thanks

[Daydreamer]

Your tricky challenge of winning my heart left me thinking what was it all about?




You are a strong man but don't think I'm any less,

I have a strong eraser to wipe away all your mess..

These were the best lines👌
Very well written!

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you.... :)

[Jamestown]

I thought it was well written and had great depth and emotions.

[Tasfia Islam]

Well, u thought? Don't u think it now? :) Glad u liked it... Thank you... :)

[Cool Girl]

Very emotional. I can relate...
I love this poem. Amazing job:)

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you... :)

[Cool Girl]

Welcome... :)

[armin]

You are a strong man but don't think I'm any
less,
I have a strong eraser to wipe away all your
mess..

I loved those phrases Anna, Bravo for that.
Keep it up.

armin. ...

[armin]

You are a strong man but don't think I'm any
less,
I have a strong eraser to wipe away all your
mess..

I loved those phrases Anna, Bravo for that.
Keep it up.

armin. ...

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you Armin... :)

[Terrence Chang]

Beautifully well written piece. Love the way you write please send me some more.

[Tasfia Islam]

Oh sure..... Glad u like my poems.....thanks for reading... :)

[Emily]

I love how you write love poems!
You put so much emotion in it!
Keep it up!

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you .... :)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Ah.. i liked the sensitivity here .kinda my type . Beautiful ! :

[Tasfia Islam]

Thanks... :)

[matrix101]

Thank you for sharing......

[Tasfia Islam]

My pleasure... :) thanks for the review..