God and I Talk

Now I use God as a word to describe my diety. My God may not be your God and that is okay.

God and I talk

rarely.

I try not to trouble

God with my sorrows.

God has enough to

worry about.

But when I humble

my pride at times.

We will sit for hours/days

pouring out my fears/wounds

joys/concerns/my questions.

My self.

And God replies with

the rising of the sun.

My Child today is

here, take away all your

fears of tomorrow

all your wounds from

yesterday.

Live in TODAY!

I made it for you.

And I weep.

Reviews

[Reinabana]

A line that really spoke to me was the one about God having enough to worry about. Its interesting that one can feel like a bother to God a times, and that our worries may be trivial in the grand scheme of things. One critique I have is the punctuation is a little choppy, but maybe that was intentional?

[Tate Viviano]

Hey thanks for reading and that is one of my favorite lines as well. Ya know when I sit down to talk to my God and I'm like " My coworker was a jerk today!." I think wait a minute, there are wars on, starvation and other opressions. So it makes me stop and think about moving my problems towards solutions and remembering I have it pretty good. Also yeah the wierd punctuationis intentional. I like the weird cadance! So again thanks so mch for reading! Cheers!

[Hebe]

Fantastic piece ... you really captured the conversation, it felt real from the heart... and the end line was perfect!

[Tate Viviano]

Aww thanks so much it means alot! Glad you liked it!

[Hebe]

Your welcome ...keep writing :)

[Tate Viviano]

Again thank you so much for that support. Always makes me happy to hear. You also keep it up, just read a handfull of your poems. Great stuff.