Surgery

Sorry, I have not been on in a long time. I had just had surgery in my lower back.

The pain

it eats at my soul

leaving me in sorrow

 

The taste of sour pills

and the dry bread

leaves dizziness in my head

 

 

I hope this over soon

right now I feel like a hopeless goon

 

Pale blue curtains close over me

as I fall soft asleep from the medicine

singing my brain a lullaby

Author's Note

Hope you like it! =)

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Speedy recovery...A good poem...:)

[Rhianne Ney]

Nice poem, Tavionna. You described the pain of a surgery in lines of words that proves to be amazing. Great job on that (;

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Nice poem to describe how you suffered from pain of surgery and the process of recovery.
Well done, Tavionna. :)

[KeelyJane]

Gotta love painkillers. lol
Nice poem.

[Mayur Sadhu]

simple, sweet, loving poem... :)