Quit Smoking and You'll Hurt Dogs

Quit Smoking and You'll Hurt Dogs

A Poem by Kiara
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The title explains it.

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My dad stands up
As my dog barks.
I call out his name,
But dad's already there.
I know what's going to happen,
But I don't look away.
I hate seeing him do this.
I want to hold my ears,
Not hear the innocent yipe.
I'm frozen.
Dad's hand comes down on my poor dog's face.
I scream at my dog,
Run down the stairs,
And pick him up.
I don't cry.
I just hold him,
Whispering that it's okay.
He's a good boy.
He's scared.
His previous owner beat him.
He's had enough pain in his life.
So Dad,
Why do you have to hurt him more?

© 2012 Kiara


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Its something you guys as a family really need to talk meaningfully about. It's not just gang up on dad or mom or you or any one person... Its to resolve the issue - whatever it may be...not just band-aid a symptom or two. And if you guys as a family face things together it WILL make a world of difference when big things occur... and yes biggies always do come up.

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Very good, very difficult to read due to the subject matter... I loved it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Its something you guys as a family really need to talk meaningfully about. It's not just gang up on dad or mom or you or any one person... Its to resolve the issue - whatever it may be...not just band-aid a symptom or two. And if you guys as a family face things together it WILL make a world of difference when big things occur... and yes biggies always do come up.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it! so heart wrenching and so taboo and so brilliant!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:'( This made me cry.


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That's terrible.......:'c

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Taylor Bigelow, I am eighteen and I absolutely love my boyfriend, my cats, music, writing, and playing my trumpet. Some of the bands I listen to are: Pierce the Veil, Sleeping with Sir.. more..

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