A Journey Through My Heart

A Journey Through My Heart

A Poem by Taylor Williams
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a journey through my heart

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come my friend
come with me, and take my hand
let me take you for a ride

through the veins, the arteries
femoral to vena cava, full circle to the heart
where my depression lies, buried so deep
let me take you for a ride
into the darkest of my mind, 
untouched even in sleep

Here, where my heart should be
instead is a shadow, bearing her smile
Here, where we should feel my heartbeat
instead is the shockwave, her unheard sorrow
Here, where i should feel happy
instead i feel nothing, empty

come my friend
come with me, and take my hand
let me take you for a ride
into the womb, 
the womb of my, suicide

© 2011 Taylor Williams


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Depression... Depression's yelling aloud through innocent and simple words. A melancholic images have created a depth darkness. The tragic imagination here is speakable and heart-warming. The first stanza 'come my friend ... ' isn't just some couple words that pulled together to made some lines... It's a call to every reader to join you your own misery and feel your emptiness. I could relate to this poetry. Deep and well-written...
'the womb of my, suicide'... LOVE IT

Posted 10 Years Ago


Some deep feelings well put into words. Some times we all have the same feelings. Well crafted poem I like it. Enjoyed reading

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Added on June 26, 2011
Last Updated on June 26, 2011
Tags: pain, loss, love, heartbreak, heart, shadows, darkness, journey, discovery

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Taylor Williams
Taylor Williams

Winston-Salem, NC



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Well i figured id redo this since a lot has change. Im taylor williams still but im now twenty years old. I joined the marine corps in june of 2012 to help further myself physically and mentally. I lo.. more..

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