The Beach

The Beach

A Poem by Taylor Williams
"

My break away from writing about depressing s**t

"
lets party up, yeah
put your hands in the air
take a drink, take a hit
throw away every care
and I promise that tonight will be
the end of, 
self loathing and pity

lets go,
bottoms up lift it up
gonna roll soon, so hurry it up
go chug chug chug
got two more to go
wont stop, 'til the booze is gone
hell we're kids we got, time to blow

we got lost on that, four hour drive
on the way to the beach
where we feel so alive
not a care in the world
but another party 
another girl
lets pretend, it's Vegas for a night
and throw our hands
into the sky

lets go,
bottoms up lift it up
gonna roll soon so hurry it up
go chug chug chug
got two more to go
wont stop till the booze is gone
hell we're kids we got time to blow

forget, everything
lose yourself, in the scene
girl take my hand, and 
come with me
between the sheets
our own fantasy
forget, everything
lets lose ourselves, at the beach

© 2011 Taylor Williams


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HA! A party poem. For some reason, I find these pretty hard to write. But I love this one. J'adore.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Awesome poem. Sounds happy and fun, and loved the "bottoms up lift it up." :)
Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Beautifully narrated.Beach here is a resort only, not of much importance. Forget everything is the principal message. I like the concept and the message as well.

Posted 8 Years Ago


so many different things you can do with the concept of the beach, i like your version, very playful and fun to read!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Brilliant! :) you've got real range as a a poet, great write :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


I agree with Erika, This sounds like this could be a song. Maybe add another verse and use the let's go stanza as your chorus.

Posted 8 Years Ago


A true and bare prose that leaves the mind tingling, well done

Posted 8 Years Ago


haah
i like it^-^
sounds like a song..
gramar errors..

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on July 1, 2011
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Tags: party, laugh, fun times, drinking, smoking

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Taylor Williams
Taylor Williams

Winston-Salem, NC



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Well i figured id redo this since a lot has change. Im taylor williams still but im now twenty years old. I joined the marine corps in june of 2012 to help further myself physically and mentally. I lo.. more..

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