Remorse is a Dead Language

Remorse is a Dead Language

A Poem by Taylor Williams

I'll, take, everything that you are
and throw, it all. face down in the dirt
you are the epitome, of everything
that I do see
to be wrong with this life
you are the poison
at the tip, of humanity's knife
the death blow
to my will and soul
the misfortune in Russian roulette
that buts the bullet, through my head
I pull the trigger
trying to squeeze the life out of you
and sprayed my brains
all over the, god damned room
but please don't hesitate
please take your turn
and join me in hell
where us heart breakers burn

see beyond, the looking glass
focus on something else,
other than, your false reflection
this is the truth that you
have ignored right from the start
I am not human
I'll take my revenge, and rip out your heart
no remorse
for the dead
you're nothing more than a slave to trend
this is the
end of you, and everything you are
never worked for anything
so take every wish upon a star
send it with a kiss, and tell me how far
you get before the wind gives up
and exposes to all you lack of gut

no remorse
for the dead
no remorse
for the weak
no remorse
for you
anymore

© 2011 Taylor Williams


Author's Note

Taylor Williams
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Emotion was really strong in this poem...but I think the song I was listening to as I read it enhanced it :D , anyways a few spelling errors and spots that didn't quite make sense. Other than that, J'adore!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Not Realy my kind of poetry, though emotions flowed
Well written and well executed

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love how this sounds like russian roulette kinda. In a different way. I guess.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Excellent. A good description. I could enjoy.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I could relate a lot to this. It was good :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


ahaha " im hungover " oh wow..
anyways; great piece.
reminds me alot of a BMTH song..
bleeds feelings,
and oozee imagery. (i dont know how to spell that word

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on July 6, 2011
Last Updated on July 16, 2011
Tags: revenge, desperation, laziness, dreams

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Taylor Williams
Taylor Williams

Winston-Salem, NC



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Well i figured id redo this since a lot has change. Im taylor williams still but im now twenty years old. I joined the marine corps in june of 2012 to help further myself physically and mentally. I lo.. more..

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