The beast inside

The beast inside

A Poem by Tina
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Controlling your anger can be a challenge.. and no I didn't kill anyone lol

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Bubbling Within ,trying to hide the Beast inside.
 It shakes its cage full of Rage. It wants to hunt 
can smell the blood.  I struggle to restrain it . 
 it hates , it hurts . it can never be tamed and forever 
must be contained. Its killed before.


April, 30, 2021

© 2021 Tina


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this is extremely expressive and the last two lines are so powerful....so powerful...i felt its grip.
j.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Indeed, we all have a shadow self within that contains our most unpleasant aspects. With some, containing it is more difficult for others. But we must never try to destroy it, for it is part of us.

Posted 1 Week Ago


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Ryn
Reads very well! I enjoyed this poem.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes, anger is a beast & many of us have some roiling inside. Your poem describes how it can feel to have this monster raising hell inside with gnarling imagery for all the senses (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina

1 Week Ago

Thank you why did you close your page? I was going to read your writing. It's sad people are so har.. read more
Theres a beast in us all. How we tame it is to us. I need more poems on anger.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a good read as I say. You make your point well.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think we need to do more channel rage than restrain it. Think about it. Written good.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


A cool poem. I like. Let the rage rain on the deserving. Lowers the BP.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


It can be quite difficult I agree. I like this.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tina

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Hi I'm Tina.. I'm 53. I've written short stories and poetry off and on for years. I enjoy reading poetry. A lot of my short stories do leave people wanting to know more, I like that. Whenever I try .. more..

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