Just me

Just me

A Poem by Tina
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This romantic poem just came to me like a song One Day

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When I close my eyes you are there, running your fingers through my hair, while I hold you close. Bare to our two eyes alone ,when I'm with you I am home. Hold on to me and never let me go!

Love me dear don't ever slip away, heal my heart and drive this pain away, because when I see there is no you ,just me.

Let me be your anchor in the sea,
The watcher on the tower that never sleeps. To hold your light I find, strikes me down and cast me blind. When we kiss my fears are swept away.. don't go! Please tell me that you'll stay.

Love me dear, don't ever slip away. Heal my heart and drive this pain away, because when I see, there is no you, just me.

All that I have is yours, so throw open all your doors. Take my hand and let our spirits sore. Together we can brave the storm, tease the flame our hearts adorn, The tempest fiercest passion, you and me.

Please let me love you, don't ever slip away. Let me heal your heart and drive your pain away. Because when I see, there is no you, just me.

© 2021 Tina


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A plea to someone in pain with a heart that has been broken. Offering love to someone whose heart has been hurt isn't easy. It takes time for trust to be restored. I left this poem hoping that your wishes will be granted. Heartfelt lines Tina.

Chris

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina

1 Week Ago

Thank you .. the poem just swept over me like a river , it just came out. It was written years ago



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A plea to someone in pain with a heart that has been broken. Offering love to someone whose heart has been hurt isn't easy. It takes time for trust to be restored. I left this poem hoping that your wishes will be granted. Heartfelt lines Tina.

Chris

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina

1 Week Ago

Thank you .. the poem just swept over me like a river , it just came out. It was written years ago
a dear sentiment to hold and plead.

I did catch a couple lil things that distract...
"When we kiss my fears or swept away.. " - or = are? perhaps.

It doesn't take away from your meaning - it is just a distraction.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Tina

1 Week Ago

Thanks for the heads up I fixed it

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Added on May 3, 2021
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Tags: Love, romance

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Tina
Tina

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Hi I'm Tina.. I'm 53. I've written short stories and poetry off and on for years. I enjoy reading poetry. A lot of my short stories do leave people wanting to know more, I like that. Whenever I try .. more..

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