People watching

People watching

A Story by Tina
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Just got a gag me with a pixie stick Romance short story

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Picture  a couple in a park , on a bridge at night watching
New Year's Eve fireworks. Snow covered everything. 
 they faced each other a moment smiling, the short haired 
woman made sure the long haired woman was warm. Then she
pulls her closely and kisses her. 
" I'm glad you're here with me, my family loves you. " Said the
 short haired woman. "I'm happy to be here with you, I like them too. " 
they continue to watch the light display unaware I was watching.
 it was indeed a magical Night , fireworks illuminated the night sky.  
then the short haired woman took a small box from her pocket and
offered it to the other. I think I gasped in Unison with the long haired
 woman as she put her hand to her mouth knowing what was in the box. 
The short haired woman said "I've known you a long time, I love you, 
I think it's time we made this officially long-term. I want you to be the
 last person I see at night and the first person I see in the morning." 
I swooned as I would watching a romance on TV  and the other woman 
gave a joyful "yes!!" in tears the woman took off her glove and let the 
other slip the most lovely , unique ring I've ever seen onto her finger 
"oh it's so beautiful!" Said the long haired woman. " I couldn't just get
 any old ring for you, it had to be a special and amazing as you."
 they hugged and kissed then walked back to their car , leaving me on 
a dark cold bridge and as the finale ended  I left feeling touched and 
hoping one day I'd findthat special someone.

March 05,2021

© 2021 Tina


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' .. leaving me on - a dark cold bridge and as the finale ended I left feeling touched and - hoping one day I'd find that special someone. ' Of course you will..

What a wonderful series of moments and - on such a special night! The joy and laughs. hands held and hugs will have moved on into a new space in time. Unforgettable! Your story is everything love should show and be, Tina, Thank you so much for sharing it. Take care, keep safe and.. smiling.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina

1 Week Ago

Thank you very much. It's was inspired by a vision in my head .
emmajoy

1 Week Ago

Best place to discover magic, Tina!



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' .. leaving me on - a dark cold bridge and as the finale ended I left feeling touched and - hoping one day I'd find that special someone. ' Of course you will..

What a wonderful series of moments and - on such a special night! The joy and laughs. hands held and hugs will have moved on into a new space in time. Unforgettable! Your story is everything love should show and be, Tina, Thank you so much for sharing it. Take care, keep safe and.. smiling.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina

1 Week Ago

Thank you very much. It's was inspired by a vision in my head .
emmajoy

1 Week Ago

Best place to discover magic, Tina!
It's heartwarming to see. Love is love.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina

1 Month Ago

Thank you for reading I agree Love Is Love
Those moments are so special. To have witnessed their joy memorable. On New Years Eve too, complete with fireworks. Most people long for someone to love, perhaps your turn will come soon. Thanks for the read Tina. Enjoyable.

Chris

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina

1 Month Ago

Thank you very much ..
Chris

1 Month Ago

You're welcome Tina.
Reading your story with an LGBTQ plot without any tragedy was delightful. Seeing people being homophobic is disgusting, and the fact that you didn't put forward any homophobic thoughts was a very nice and likable gesture.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Tina

1 Month Ago

I was with a woman for 4 years before It went South and I'd like find a love like this one day. than.. read more
Beautiful and touching to say the least.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina

1 Month Ago

Thank you very much
nice romantic write,great imgery

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina

1 Month Ago

Thank you I was worried it was over the top with the romance
 wordman

1 Month Ago

no,it is very good

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Added on May 6, 2021
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Tags: Romance, engagement, love, lesbian romance

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Hi I'm Tina.. I'm 53. I've written short stories and poetry off and on for years. I enjoy reading poetry. A lot of my short stories do leave people wanting to know more, I like that. Whenever I try .. more..

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