Don't pick me

Don't pick me

A Poem by Tina
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Love can be beautiful and long with the right person

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In a field of many flowers you saw me. 
Red and waving wild like a flame. Come 
touch my fire. It was my scent that led 
you to me and drove you mad with desire. 
Touch my petals So Soft. Taste my nectar 
so sweet. Be nurtured, never thirst. 
Let your mind dance in the wind as my 
leaves tickle your feet. Don't pick me.
 Let me thrive in my Earth so warm, 
burrowed like my roots intangled deep. 
Come Grow Old with me till we must sleep.
 In our place love and beauty will overflow. 
On a hill, in a valley under blue skies We'll go.


05/22/10

© 2021 Tina


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Dear Tina. The poem is wonderful. I fell into the sweetness and the hope of the words.
"Come Grow Old with me till we must sleep.
In our place love and beauty will overflow.
On a hill, in a valley under blue skies We'll go."
I loved the above lines. These words. My wish to know. Thank you dear friend for sharing the wonderful poetry for love hope.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reading
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Hello dear Tina. I loved your work today and you are welcome.



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Dear Tina. The poem is wonderful. I fell into the sweetness and the hope of the words.
"Come Grow Old with me till we must sleep.
In our place love and beauty will overflow.
On a hill, in a valley under blue skies We'll go."
I loved the above lines. These words. My wish to know. Thank you dear friend for sharing the wonderful poetry for love hope.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reading
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Hello dear Tina. I loved your work today and you are welcome.
How lovely is the poetic expression in this poem. Come grow old with me - wouldn't that be a fine thing if love lasted that long. Thank you Tina.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina

2 Years Ago

A lot of times it doesn't last that long but it's rare
almost a nursery rhyme in its hope and simplicity...

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina

2 Years Ago

Thank you for reading

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