Burn rubber

Burn rubber

A Poem by Tina
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When you've had enough, you've had enough.

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I can't believe I left. Sitting here in my car
 trying to forget you and sort my life out again.
 This time alone. That word alone. Like an empty 
house stripped of its remnants. Picked clean by 
vultures, Much like my heart. You took from it what
 you wanted and left it in Ruins. I turned away from
 you and all I cherished. All I had accomplished was
 lost in my dust As I headed towards my freedom.
 I'm home again having to start over , to heal my
 heart and rebuild my life.


04/10/14

© 2021 Tina


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Sometimes we just have to rebuild alone before we can share our heart's dwelling with another.
j.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina

3 Months Ago

So true. Thank you for reading
Visually impactful. To feel your heart is like a carcas picked clean by a vulture is the pits. Takes courage to say enough us enough. Taking control is the best thing you can do in this type of situation.

Chris

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina

4 Months Ago

I did, I left her this poem is about leaving her
Takes strength to act - especially when there are known consequences as well as unknown ones.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 23, 2021
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Tags: Break ups, emotions

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Hi I'm Tina.. I'm 54. I've written short stories and poetry off and on for years. I enjoy reading poetry. A lot of my short stories do leave people wanting to know more, I like that. Whenever I try .. more..

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