Echoes Of Your Love

Echoes Of Your Love

A Poem by Temperance

Echoes of your love


Still reverberate in my heart


This heart and soul let down its walls


             …just for you


Your being caressed and held it


            I loved you

  soul is hollow


with your absence


You loved me


and then, you didn’t


These rains are angels’ tears


camouflaging my own


Not soon enough will the winds come


          and blow through my heart


Clearing out the pain


          You have left there


But…the echo will remain




© 2022 Temperance

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This is so beautifully sad. You create such strong images and feelings with your words. I can feel the heartbreak. Lovely poem.

Posted 5 Days Ago


5 Days Ago

Thanks again, Dilan. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Dilan Gray

5 Days Ago

You're welcome, Temperance!
my heart is saddened by your protagonists circumstances .. she has dived head long and recklessly and being caught and loved is then let go .. i confess i have been on both ends of that stick more than once in me ol' life; but, honestly, i will do it again and again .. love is worth it .. we make mistakes ... and then we get it right ... maybe.... ;)

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


2 Weeks Ago

It wasn't a reckless dive and was full of joy...until it wasn't. True, honest communication would ha.. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Weeks Ago

i'm sorry for your loss :(

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you Mr. E!
Yes, those echoes always remain. We may slowly heal, but we never forget!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


2 Weeks Ago

Thank you for reading my poem. 😊 unfortunately, is right!
After a love affair, after the disappointment and the pain, yes the echoes remain. Love can hurt. A poem that many will relate to.


Posted 3 Weeks Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


3 Weeks Ago

Thank you for reviewing my work. I'm new here so I welcome any suggestions. Yes, love.. read more
Chris Shaw

3 Weeks Ago

Welcome to WC. Hope you will be happy here.

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Added on May 4, 2022
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