Echoes Of Your Love

Echoes Of Your Love

A Poem by Temperance

Echoes of your love

 

Still reverberate in my heart

 

This heart and soul let down its walls

 

             …just for you

 

Your being caressed and held it

 

            I loved you

         

Now.......my soul is hollow

 

with your absence

 

You loved me

 

and then, you didn’t

 

These rains are angels’ tears

 

camouflaging my own

 

Not soon enough will the winds come

 

          and blow through my heart

 

Clearing out the pain

 

          You have left there

 

But…the echo will remain

 


 

 

© 2022 Temperance


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This is so beautifully sad. You create such strong images and feelings with your words. I can feel the heartbreak. Lovely poem.

Posted 5 Days Ago


Temperance

5 Days Ago

Thanks again, Dilan. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Dilan Gray

5 Days Ago

You're welcome, Temperance!
my heart is saddened by your protagonists circumstances .. she has dived head long and recklessly and being caught and loved is then let go .. i confess i have been on both ends of that stick more than once in me ol' life; but, honestly, i will do it again and again .. love is worth it .. we make mistakes ... and then we get it right ... maybe.... ;)
E.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Temperance

2 Weeks Ago

It wasn't a reckless dive and was full of joy...until it wasn't. True, honest communication would ha.. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Weeks Ago

i'm sorry for your loss :(
Temperance

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you Mr. E!
Yes, those echoes always remain. We may slowly heal, but we never forget!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Temperance

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you for reading my poem. 😊 unfortunately, is right!
After a love affair, after the disappointment and the pain, yes the echoes remain. Love can hurt. A poem that many will relate to.

Chris

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Temperance

3 Weeks Ago

Chris,
Thank you for reviewing my work. I'm new here so I welcome any suggestions. Yes, love.. read more
Chris Shaw

3 Weeks Ago

Welcome to WC. Hope you will be happy here.

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