Coming Together

Coming Together

A Poem by Temperance

From one plane to another we’ve passed,

From one plateau to another we’ve stepped.

 

Gingerly we’ve walked and lightly we’ve treaded

Into each other’s lives we’ve crept.

 

The growth we’ve made is beyond explanation,

The warmth we’ve found is beyond expectation

 

When and how is a curious thought,

Should it matter or, should it not?

 

© 2022 Temperance


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What a wonderful love poem that captures, with its words and form, the joy and wonder of falling in love!

Posted 1 Week Ago


Temperance

1 Week Ago

Thank you Richard!
The Road to each others~ wow my friend! love this little piece, it speaks with simple words yet with the depths of a journey of the two finding each others. as for your question, it only matter when it creates a loving memory, doesn't it? :>

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Temperance

2 Weeks Ago

Again, Ms. Lightsong, thank you for reading my work! Loving memory? Well, this was originally writte.. read more
ahahaha ...very cute .. i am always a big fan of couplets, tho i write in free form. i think couplets lend a lot of strength .. especially when the flow is so smooth, as in "Coming Together" ..and some creative rhyme with a bit of sing song in closing and .. for me .. you have an uplifting fun write that is actually speaking to the "deep" ... sometimes the mystery of our relationships is better than the concrete .. which does have it's plusses as well .. thanks for inviting me to read .. and welcome to the Cafe' .. i hope you find the experience a great one!
E.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Temperance

2 Weeks Ago

Mr. E, thank you for taking the time to review my work. The rhyme seems natural for me and, sometime.. read more
interesting how you crafted this piece as a wave of one line rolling into the next and so on
here's the winning ticket ... the impact of the first line still carries to the last line like the motion of a wave
it reads as a singular piece, but each line stands on its own
well down poet friend well damned good done!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Temperance

2 Weeks Ago

Oh Keith, I am so humbled by your review....makes my heart go pity-pat! I never imagined someone wou.. read more
When you meet someone who makes you feel like this it is a glorious thing! A tender, heartfelt write!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Temperance

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you Robert!

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