My Love

My princess ,

you are worth more than this world can give you 

You've be burnt by all this brutality 

and I can sense from your childish whims 

that all you need is a careful hand.

My angel,

you deserve more than I can give, 

you need a love as strong as life 

and an honest opinion:

you have the prettiest soul I've ever found 

My baby girl,

I see as your eyes light up 

that you are in love,

but there's darkness behind them 

from a life before hand 

from tragedies that struck. 

My love, 

It hurts to think of you in pain 

when I look at your scars 

and think of you hurt beyond belief. 

The way you think of your self is disgusting 

It's not true and wish I could show you 

how I see you in my eyes 

I am blinded by your beauty...

and I honest cant believe anyone wouldn't be.

Author's Note

ignore grammar and puntuation

Reviews

[Chris]

It is hard saying what you are trying to say to a person so brought down by hurt and life. You have to give them lil things to believe and trust in before they can even comprehend the big thing of their own self-worth. It takes time and caring to overcome doubt and hurts.

As for the poem, well, I understood what you wanted to do - didn't I? It was rough and had some stumbles but you already knew that... but I did understand.