Melencouly of Uncertainty

It's been a while since I wrote poetry, but I came up with this peice over night & decided to start trying poetry again. Tell me what y'all think

A grasp of breath with a sting of tears,
My Fate trapped within unknown fears.
Purity in beauty slips away into cruelty,
Insanity building from the unjust futility.

Wilting Flowers of Summers long past,
The fall of time within the forsake Glass.
Winter comes bringing death upon the lands,
Only for life to spring forth from nature's hands.

Life moves on with this eternal show,
What place is there for a forsaken soul?
Lost are the seasons of a Forgotten past,
Its Future unseen concealed by worn mask.

Candles remain unlit no room for hope,
The despair from shadows begin to flow.
Darkness comes to consume the light,
As Future's time slowly fails it's fight.

Author's Note

I'm aware of my Grammer issues as I suffer from Dyslexia, but feel free to assist me on pointing out flaws & good parts of the poem