Love

I just wrote how I felt like at that moment

Love is like a lump of gold,
Hard to get, and hard to hold.
Of all the girls I've ever met,
You're the one I can't forget.

I do believe that God above,
Created you for me to love.
He chose you from all the rest,
Because he knew I would love you best.

Reviews

[Pradnya]

good one

[Katie]

This is such a cute poem, the rhyming is very nice and flows perfectly. Great job.

[Joe]

I like the rhyming and rhythm of this poem. Nice job!

[JB Murray]

Basic... simple... and to the point... did she blush when u gave this?

[Bette]

short and sweet. the flow is great!

[yashasvi]

dis is smthin really sweet n der z dis charm abt it dat makes it hummable...

[St.Jimmy]

wow! you wrote many emotions in less words
wonderful rhyme scheme and a touching poem
Keep up the good work!
~Aaradhya

[Emily]

Wonderful word choice and rhyme scheme. It is never forced nor choppy. You've done a fantastic job of really letting us see what you wanted to say. I hope you do find and 'hold' this love!
Nice writing!

[maryjaneuy]

So sweet.
"I do believe that God above,
Created you for me to love."
Really love those lines! :)
two thumbs up for you!

[Dev]

Aww.. that was so sweet.. It has a good flow and I can actually say that this would make a really good song.. Keep it up.. ♥ly !!