The Love Thief

The Love Thief

A Poem by Carson Scott

A poem about an upset man because he discovered that his love was with someone else.

I was sitting beside the street, then a young man sat next to me.
When this gentleman took a seat, he looked down sadly at his feet.

In his hands he carried roses, all very fragile without thorns.
Sadly sighing at his defeat, holding back his tears of mourning.

He reached in his pocket soon after, then he took out a ring.
I said in humorous laughter, "You got flowers for me?"

He shook his head and cracked a grin, "These were for my beautiful Lynn.
I saw her with another man". "I will find that jerk" I said, than as far as I could I ran! Should have known she had a boyfriend.

© 2012 Carson Scott

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haha... loved it. very good write

Posted 9 Years Ago

Carson Scott

9 Years Ago

Lol thanks :)
oh this completely fooled me, and i loved the surprise ending...

you are so clever....

thanks for the smile (sans thorns)---


Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carson Scott

9 Years Ago

Thanks for the review! :)
A good poem of humor! You have a gift of a sharp wit.
I love your poem. I love you too my son!
Thank you for your gift of laughter today. :-)

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on December 3, 2012
Last Updated on December 4, 2012
Tags: Run, love, running, away, funny


Carson Scott
Carson Scott

hendrsonville, NC

Hi! I'm Carson, a fifteen year old freshman born on 1997, Nov/1. Recently I have been interested in poems and I have started drafting them. I am very busy and I usually have about a hour of free time... more..

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