--- What Springs ---

--- What Springs ---

A Poem by Creepy Swine Guy

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This is a great contrast between something that is used metaphorically as hope and new life, the season of spring and waters that come from the ground, to express something dark that feeds a negative and life sucking force within us. Also the contrast of fast awake...this is great imagery!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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this captures the depth of turmoil. the power one drop of emotion/water can have once funneled into many.
I love it great writing

Posted 6 Years Ago


knowing won't dam the dyke but gives a name to
dam


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a great contrast between something that is used metaphorically as hope and new life, the season of spring and waters that come from the ground, to express something dark that feeds a negative and life sucking force within us. Also the contrast of fast awake...this is great imagery!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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