Who Warms The Sun?

It never occurred to me to ask

"Who brightens the sun's day?"

Not, at least, until I met you.

 

How can you need to be warmed?

You, who casts your golden glow

On all who happen through your light.

 

Really?! The sun has her dark days?

She lives in her very own dark place?

 

How does one bring light to the sun herself?

I am not nearly that bright or that warm.

 

How can I bring warmth, and brightness

And cheer to the very source of such things?

 

Perhaps if I show her the wonderful

Person in her mirror.

Reviews

[Workingonit!!]

Beautiful message in poem form to a woman. This is simple yet romantic in the sense of reflecting the light you see back to warm her up in a dark mood? That is love.. it can be for a close friend, family member or a lover on a bad day. Everyone does have their dark days.. the brightest have the darkest at times or at least it feels that way when people dodge (most don't embrace clouds.. what's that saying positive attracts positive.. don't touch negative especially electrical charges.. lol) .. the same people only to come back chasing the brightest warmth again. If only we could stay happy all the time.. but then would we KNOW we were happy anymore.. it would become mundane.

[:)]

I think every girl need's this poem.

[Wondering Mind]

This has the beauty of innocence, and the wisdom of Time. Wonderfully penned.

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Oh what lovely sentiments...that is the way to brighten the sun's day! and a steady road to its heart :)

[DalainaRenee]

Well descriptive! I like it!

[Moonflower]

I loved the ending lines.

[Shellie]

very nice. the title is very good simple but effective and the verses well put together. great work!

[Shantel Moore]

i think its an amazing poem i love it

[Lilly]

That is beautiful - especially the last lines. I enjoyed this poem. Very nice work.

[Desert Dreamer]

Wonderful poem! Even the Sun needs a friend to cheer her up, and we all need a cheerful friend at times.