a look into the life of the lost.

a look into the life of the lost.

A Story by Katie Flores
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these are words straight from the lips of a classmate of mine. i dont like him, i pity him. it says story, but this is real. these are HIS words. (caution: foul language)

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He is proud of his wrongs.
"I blacked out, i feel hella weird. When my brain ticks, I'm gone. I didn't know I had that much hands"
The pride in his ignorance.
    he sings:
"Straight up. I'm smoke'n dope"

He has a girl.
"She is hella f****n' smart"
But she dropped out.
She is 17.
She is pregnant.

         "But n***a, I'm getting blood work fo-sho. F**k it n***a, I'm going on a show. F**k it n***a, they pay like $600. For yo food, yo ticket, yo room, everything.
 My cousin went on, I know how it do n***a. The guy said," You ARE NOT THE FATHER." 
And that n***a was dancin' on the stage." 
      He thinks he is so different, so hard and so "f****n' boss". He thinks he is a true gangster and above all over this. 
He thinks him and his destructive ways are the greatest, and only things in this world. in his world, he is king, to rule and be lord and live. 
      Thinking only of satisfying now.
"But my girl knows not to lie to me. She knows. Once i held myself back. But she knows"
     And he sings:
"I'm smokin' dope. I'm on the ceiling."
"I'm smokin' dope. I'm on my cell phone."

© 2012 Katie Flores


Author's Note

Katie Flores
this is a guy i have in my art class. the sad thing is is that this boy is just FIFTEEN. his excuse is "YOLO". a very pitiful excuse, in my opinion. please review. thanks

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this is feakin sad. His momma and dad need to set him straight!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


sounds like an idiot. I know tons of people like this. Thugs are a last man in disguise. And he is winning......he probably has girls throwing themselves at him. He is getting everything he wants by pure ignorance so of course he is arrogant. But this will end up doing him in. I have childhood friends who are in jail now. for a long time. it seems like fun @ 17. Its not fun anymore at 31 and in jail for 30 years. great piece

Posted 11 Years Ago


Stay away from this guy. He's a loser and he might be dangerous.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on April 27, 2012
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Tags: Lost, different, boss, pregnant

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Katie Flores
Katie Flores

I see pine, not palm trees, i see forest and dirt, not sand and beaches, CA



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i am starting to find myself. for the longest time i thought i could only be one thing, but im starting to realize... i can't. And well there's not much else to say... I am a pretty plain person, a.. more..

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