No one will ever be more

No one will ever be more

A Poem by Amber Victoria Tudor
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In response to a poem "alone with everybody" by Bukowski. Don't laugh on my little bukowski trip, just read a book of his poems and really liked them...

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I am alone with everybody too…
Searching for something deeper than
A warm body
 
I hate being just a body
To you,
To him,
To the one before him,
To the ambiguously gay man,
The fat man
The poet
 
Even
The man that told me
I was more
 
I never was
and never will be
More
 
No one will ever be more

© 2008 Amber Victoria Tudor


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I like it because its honest, its the truth no bullshit. Nice work

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wow... now that is deep stuff! I liked it so much. The meaning is superb. Thanks for sharing this!

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like this, I found this sad really, i could feel the connection in this as cute as well, well presented write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


The depth you seek only lacks definition. But sad to say, we take a consensus.

Posted 12 Years Ago


haha,

i see your point, being objectified is just wrong,
but, you wrote about it in a funny way.
the
"To the ambiguously gay man,"
line was really a surprise.

Posted 12 Years Ago


strange that we're social creatures and mostly only moms with lots of kids feel like they're not alone when it all comes down to it. And I suppose even they do too in their inner selves. At least ya have fun;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Amber Victoria Tudor
Amber Victoria Tudor

Lake Forest, CA



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