Snowflake 雪片 Haiku

Snowflake 雪片 Haiku

A Poem by The Dudeman (Kenneth T)
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Some things you just have to leave alone or else you'll ruin it. This philosophy can be applied to life too.

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雪片
Perfect, special ice
Changed by a warm, caring touch
To boring water

© 2010 The Dudeman (Kenneth T)


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Ah, that's a really good haiku. Very well and beautifully written. Great imagery.

Posted 9 Years Ago


this is very thoughtful~ a seed meditation~ and so very applicable to the natural wonder humans are constantly trying to alter and cage, to own and admire, out of its natural element only realizing afterward how the wonder is lost when the true form of things is altered~

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like this. Very good. I enjoy that a 'warm caring touch' can ruin something beatiful i know the feeling.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on November 24, 2010
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The Dudeman (Kenneth T)
The Dudeman (Kenneth T)

E'ville, WI



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Hey guys, I'm Kenneth. I'm 18 years old and I'm the most conflicted person you'll ever meet. Different people know me as a nerd, an emo, a bad a*s, a pervert, and a hopeless romantic. I have jumped o.. more..

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