Moonlight 月光 Haiku

Everyone has his day when he will shine

月光

Powerful sun falls
Meek moon rises to the top
Outshining the king

Reviews

[0_o Abbie]

Wow. This is really amazing. I usually don't like poems like this but this one intrigues me. I love the symbolism. Or at least as what I perceive as symbolism. This is really beautiful.

[floarealbastra10]

simply beautiful

[Stephanie]

I've always had this attraction to the moon rather than soaking up the sun like so many others. I love this imagery. The moon is kind of an underdog, but that's part of what makes it so spectacular when it shines :) Amazing piece!

[Red Brick Keshner]

I will hold its message close and follow behind the setting sun, awaiting my time to shine! Very inspiring.

[Kakuta]

Great imagery. I like your description of the moon. I've always liked the moon more than the sun. It's much more mysterious. Thanks for the read!

[Ramachandra Kasyap]

nice perspective on sun and moon ...