Moonlight 月光 Haiku

Moonlight 月光 Haiku

A Poem by The Dudeman (Kenneth T)

Everyone has his day when he will shine

Powerful sun falls
Meek moon rises t
o the top
Outshining the king

© 2010 The Dudeman (Kenneth T)

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Wow. This is really amazing. I usually don't like poems like this but this one intrigues me. I love the symbolism. Or at least as what I perceive as symbolism. This is really beautiful.

Posted 9 Years Ago

simply beautiful

Posted 9 Years Ago

I've always had this attraction to the moon rather than soaking up the sun like so many others. I love this imagery. The moon is kind of an underdog, but that's part of what makes it so spectacular when it shines :) Amazing piece!

Posted 9 Years Ago

I will hold its message close and follow behind the setting sun, awaiting my time to shine! Very inspiring.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Great imagery. I like your description of the moon. I've always liked the moon more than the sun. It's much more mysterious. Thanks for the read!

Posted 9 Years Ago

nice perspective on sun and moon ...

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on December 23, 2010
Last Updated on December 23, 2010
Tags: haiku, sun, moon


The Dudeman (Kenneth T)
The Dudeman (Kenneth T)

E'ville, WI

Hey guys, I'm Kenneth. I'm 18 years old and I'm the most conflicted person you'll ever meet. Different people know me as a nerd, an emo, a bad a*s, a pervert, and a hopeless romantic. I have jumped o.. more..


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