A Poem To My Self

A Poem To My Self

A Poem by Sibling
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Ego. Anti-Ego. AlterEgo.

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Never could I write an ode to myself.
Never shall I fall into the pit of Ego trips.
When I see Myself in the mirror he mocks me.
He says he sees a mere shadow of himself,
Because I am but a peel of his fruitfulness,
A shallow puddle to the ocean posed as Me.
I am indeed Myself but he insists he is not me.
My mind hears him through my eye - I see Me.
And although my reflection lacks perfection,
Through introspection I realized I don't need it.
For in acceptance of 'ME', 'MYSELF' and 'I'...
My imperfections make me scenic.
We are all pretty pictures worth being seen,

© 2014 Sibling


Author's Note

Sibling
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You need your eyes examined. 'For in acceptance of 'ME' 'MYSELF' and 'I' ... My imperfections make me scenic.' Be careful or you'll turn into a narcissus. But there is nothing like self esteem to make one a successful writer. I like your self analysis and especially the line: 'My imperfections make me scenic.' You're better looking than me but I believe my imperfections make me more scenic than you. I'd like the Black Queen's view on this one. Shall we Skype or see her in person? Nice job; found it interesting.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sibling

10 Years Ago

Lol I'd love to see her perspective...btw I wrote this piece for anyone who reads it as opposed to j.. read more
beautiful ending. Lovely piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on March 24, 2013
Last Updated on December 8, 2014
Tags: narcissism, solipsism, things

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Sibling
Sibling

Durban, KwaZulu Natal, South Africa



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