My Life

My Life

A Poem by Infected Rose (aca Approaching Skull)
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Love can't solve everything

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This is because of consideration,

In any kind of situation.

Mind boggling words corrupt my mind,

From something deep that I can’t find.

Love is an eruption,

Something that has caused interruption.

 

© 2009 Infected Rose (aca Approaching Skull)


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One word, Sad. That does not mean that it is bad. It has a lot of emotion. Not your best though. Maybe if you explained it a little bit more. Try to put a reason in there? Something that caused the interruption? Just a thought :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this it says alot for such a few words and has a wonderful flow to it. This is a very well written write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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