Celestial Kiss

A Poem by J.M. Santós

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Simmer down my moon
I know the tides are high and mighty this season
Selfish and unwavering in their pull
And we both know well - our central gravities have found solace in each others presence
Our axis'
kissing as we rotate in perfect unison, rumbling about in empty space
Eventually, eternity is bound to make a promise through the red string that has tied herself to our hearts
The vastness of this endless and twinkling sky will bear witness to the way our constellations make love
Turning Velvet into suede
Grape vine into fine wine
And whimpers into hymns
Our throats so pregnant with confessions of admiration
That the locking of our lips was the only way to truly show one another how stupidly infatuated we've become..

© 2020 J.M. Santós

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Olivia Danielle

This is a beautiful poem, I'm so glad I got the pleasure to read it.
"Eventually, eternity is bound to make a promise through the red string that has tied herself to our hearts"
This line is in particular very poetic.
Excellent work!

Posted 5 Years Ago

Chris Shaw

Your Celestial Kiss, a delight to read. Some really poetic lines and you gave me some pretty special imagery. An enjoyable composition. Thank you.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago

Jade

Turning Velvet into suede
Grape vine into fine wine
And whimpers into hymns
Our throats so pregnant with confessions of admiration

Love this part, Very descriptive write. I enjoyed what you said, keep writing always

Posted 5 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind comment, Brandie. I am delighted that you enjoyed this poem and look forward.. read more

Coyote Poetry

You make the words come alive and so sweet.
"Turning Velvet into suede
Grape vine into fine wine
And whimpers into hymns"
The above lines. Wonderful and perfect. Thank you dear Poet for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote