A Poem by Mark Daniels

This is a poetic rap-like thing i made about someone.

It's been a long, long time since i last wrote
but now im in a boat, along the ocean with
a s**t ton of motion in it, along with it im
choking on, love gone wrong, and emotion, I miss her

Can't kiss her no more, we split, feels like s**t
without her. She's happy im sad, she moved on and i'm
mad. but that's why I rhyme, to distract, waste time
i'm outta wack, not myself anymore. I got a global
world war

going on in my heart, my head, and my body i'm sorry
baby, i am, please come back i miss you. someone 
get me a tissue. i know there's no excuse for
crying when im rhyming, thinking of signing off
for good. but i dont know if i could, but down the

pen and walk away, but see her and stay, Hurt, she
made me feel like dirt. So here I am, a big hole
where my heart should be, it will be my de,mise it's
not much of a surprise. But i hurt, still, don't
know how much more before i collapse in this
pool of my own blood, i'm leaving, never thought i'd
ever be believing im alone, yet another time, last time
i wanna rhyme about this, miss. i'm done.
 im sick of being the one who gets hurt

and broken hearts, the time starts now,
im here if ya need me, have fun with
him, im hurt.  im tough like the dirt i 
came from, will return to, but when it comes to
me, who, knows how long i'll be numb-
oh wait, i know.

Lighters in the sky,
when they all turn on,
i'll be with you again. the end.

© 2012 Mark Daniels

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Great rap sound...

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Mark Daniels
Mark Daniels

44077, OH

Well, here you go. This is my personal poetry/writing site. Please, feel free to browse around and read that which i have created. Also leave me some comments and suggestions, they're all welsome. Oth.. more..