3 Short Emotion Verses

these are three short poems using nothing but imagerys.

CALM

Gentle breeze upon my face

birds chirping happily

laying in a field so peaceful

clear my mind of everything

deep breaths.

stillness.

ANGER

Fists clenched, nostrils flared

broken knuckles against walls of brick

seeing red, heart beating fast

animal instincts wanting to kill

Adrenaline, not blood in my veins

Pain.

DEPRESSION

Nothing left in this life for me,

take a deep breath and i'll be free.

hands shaking, tears flowing. Regret.

"I'm Sorry." bright red against the mirror

Cold. Nothingness' embrace.

Reviews

[Marie]

This is very good. You've described these three emotions perfectly; the reader can almost see each one. I can't understand why you haven't gotten any reviews. Well, I guess you didn't ask for any. Until now.