3 Short Emotion Verses

3 Short Emotion Verses

A Poem by Mark Daniels

these are three short poems using nothing but imagerys.

Gentle breeze upon my face
birds chirping happily
laying in a field so peaceful
clear my mind of everything
deep breaths.

Fists clenched, nostrils flared
broken knuckles against walls of brick
seeing red, heart beating fast
animal instincts wanting to kill
Adrenaline, not blood in my veins

Nothing left in this life for me,
take a deep breath and i'll be free.
hands shaking, tears flowing. Regret.
"I'm Sorry." bright red against the mirror
Cold. Nothingness' embrace.

© 2012 Mark Daniels

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This is very good. You've described these three emotions perfectly; the reader can almost see each one. I can't understand why you haven't gotten any reviews. Well, I guess you didn't ask for any. Until now.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on March 14, 2012
Last Updated on March 14, 2012


Mark Daniels
Mark Daniels

44077, OH

Well, here you go. This is my personal poetry/writing site. Please, feel free to browse around and read that which i have created. Also leave me some comments and suggestions, they're all welsome. Oth.. more..